Short Story: Murder in the Theater

Hello everyone!

This is a short story I wrote from a prompt someone over on the NaNoWriMo forums suggested. The prompt was to write a story about a theater nerd and their best friend who find the play’s director murdered. So there’s an element of creepiness in this one too, but less of a supernatural kind and more of just… murder. I promise that I do write lighthearted stories sometimes!

Also, something else I want to note. I was writing this story a day or so after the awful terror attacks in New Zealand and the ending was a little bit influenced by that. What I mean is that the end reflects some of the prejudice and misunderstanding against Muslim individuals by uneducated and willfully uneducated people. I hadn’t really planned for the story to go in that direction and I have no idea if this is how the story would play out in real life, (as I did the story on a whim and researched absolutely nothing so sorry about that) so please don’t judge too harshly and I hope you enjoy!

“I still don’t understand why you auditioned for the part,” Sarah kicked a piece of gravel across the broken sidewalk.

            Josie smiled and pulled her gangster-style hat lower over her eyes. “I thought it would be a challenge.” She reached out and brushed her fingers against a metal telephone pole. “And besides, I’m the most qualified for the part.”

            Sarah groaned. “But Jones is such a jerk. Even for a gangster. He’s nasty on top of all the gangster-y stuff. Not to mention, he’s a dude! You, if you haven’t noticed, are not a dude.”

            Josie Granite was most certainly not a dude. She had long hair which she usually wore in braids, pretty blue eyes caked in makeup, and a grin that could shatter the heart of any boy stupid enough to fall for her.

            But tonight she was Geoff Jones, a Chicago gangster with a penchant for money and violence. Not to mention guns.

           “It’s just a play,” she said. “I can be whoever I’ve got the talent to be. And Steve thought I had the talent for this one, so who am I to argue?”

            Sarah snorted and flipped the end of her hijab over her shoulder. “You wouldn’t have gotten it if you weren’t so tall,” she grumbled. “It’s easy to make you look like a guy.”

            Josie grinned. “True. And like I said, I wanted to do it. It’s a challenge.”

           The play was being hosted in the local high school’s auditorium, although the show was being put on by an independent youth theater group. Steve was the man who had put the group together and made it possible for anyone to join, as long as they had the talent. He also arranged all the locations for the group to perform at.

            The pair entered the school through a side door, usually kept closed but wide open tonight, to allow the group to easily access the back of the auditorium.

            “You sure it’s okay for me to be here?” Sarah glanced around at the hive of activity. Teenagers in various outfits circa the nineteen-thirties rushed about, hauling scenery or adjusting ill-fitting suits. Some were hoisting props in the form of weapons. Various sizes of pistols and even a machine gun could be spotted in the melee.

            “Sure, it’s fine.” Josie shrugged and waved to a fellow actor. “I need you to tell me to break a leg.”

            “Good luck,” Sarah scoffed. Josie patted her on the head with a mischievous giggle.

            “Is this historically accurate?” Sarah ducked from under her friend’s hand.

            “No idea,” Josie cast around the room absentmindedly.

            “Who ya looking for?”

            “Steve. Yo, Taylor!” Josie shouted. She waved and a black-haired girl ambled over, a suit jacket in her hand.

            “Look here,” Taylor grumbled. “Some oaf spilled mustard on their costume. Why the hell would anyone have mustard backstage?”

            “That sucks,” Josie spared the stain a half-hearted glance. “Have you seen Steve? He asked me to check in with him when I got here.”

            Taylor jerked a thumb behind her. “He went to the basement for some more props. Been down there a while. Maybe you should go get him. Hey, Sarah,” she greeted the other girl before being called away by a boy who couldn’t get his tie to sit properly.

            “C’mon, let’s go.” Josie waved an arm in the direction of the basement stairs. Sarah followed, careful not to step on any props.

            They descended the stairs into the basement. The room was musty and damp feeling, the feet of a hundred high schoolers pounding over their heads.

            “Steve?”  Josie called out, her feet clattering against the stairs in her oversized shoes.

            Sarah sniffed the air. “Do you smell that?”

Josie took a deep breath. The air had a metallic tang, an edge that rose above the must and disinfectant. The two girls looked at each other.

            “It kinda smells like… blood?”

            Sarah nodded. “That’s exactly what I was thinking.”

            They ran the rest of the way down the stairs, hands scraping along the wall in search of a light switch. Sarah bumped into the light and flicked it, flooding the basement with fluorescent brightness.

            “Oh my God…”

            Steve was slumped over on his front, limbs splayed across the concrete floor. Red holes splattered the back of his torn white button-down. Streaks of blood were shot over the wall behind him, glints of metal lodged into the plaster. A gun lay on the floor next to him, identical to any of the props upstairs.

            Except for the fact that it was real.

            Josie ran forward on instinct, but Sarah grabbed her arm and held her back. “We can’t mess with anything,” she hissed, fingers digging into Josie’s arm. “It’s a crime scene. He’s dead. We need to call the police now.”

            “Dead?” Josie squeaked. “He can’t be dead! He… He…”

            “Shh.” Sarah gently led her friend away, her cell phone already in hand.

            They called the police. The principal and the janitor came running backstage. People were panicking, wringing their hands, calling their parents. It was the aftermath of shock, the tragic news of death that lurked beneath their feet.

            It was a murder. Who was the murderer? Was it someone they knew? Someone they talked to everyday? Marie from algebra? Justin from history?

            “Alright,” said a burly man with a large red mustache. He turned towards Taylor, who was still gripping the mustard-stained coat. “Now, you’re the one who found the body, eh?”

            “No, it wasn’t me!” Taylor pointed at Sarah and Josie. “They found Steve, not me!”

            The police officer held his hands up in what he believed to be a placating gesture. “It’s alright, miss. Just got confused a minute, that’s all.”

            Taylor crossed her arms, un-placated.

            The officer faced Josie and Sarah. They were cowering together, holding hands in an attempt to calm themselves. Someone had placed a shock blanket over the pair of them, although they hadn’t even realized it was there.

The officer frowned and stroked his mustache. “You two found the body?”

They nodded wordlessly.

The officer’s frown deepened.

Sarah twisted at the ends of her hijab.

“Now why would anyone want to kill your troupe’s director?”

“I don’t know,” Josie shook her head. The officer nodded and addressed Sarah, his eyebrows drawn. “Why do you think someone would want to kill him?”

“I don’t know,” Sarah said. “I wasn’t part of the troupe.”

The officer’s frown deepened. “You weren’t part of the troupe?”

“No sir.”

The officer turned to his colleague. “I think we should take this one in for questioning.” The other officer nodded silently, only sparing Sarah half a glance before turning back to the rest of the scene.

“What?” Josie shot up from her chair. “Why her? Why not anyone else? I was there when we found the body too!”

“Sit down!” thundered the policeman. Josie sat meekly.

“We’re taking her in for questioning because she’s m- ahem.  Because she wasn’t part of the group. That makes her the odd one out.”

“I have no motive,” Sarah rose from her seat. “Why on earth would I want to brutally murder the leader of my best friend’s theater troupe?”

The officer’s face turned red. “I don’t have to answer your questions. And it would be better for you if you kept quiet.”

Sarah’s face was pale, her fists clenched in the hem of her tunic.

Josie stared at the policeman. “You can’t single her out! She didn’t do anything different than the rest of us!”

“Josie, just-“

“Stop!” The officer shouted. “Unless you want me to drag you in too.”

Josie’s hair started to come out of her tightly braided bun, strands falling out from underneath her hat. “Maybe you should!” she stomped her foot. “I’m just as innocent as she is!”

“Josie, stop!” Sarah tugged at her sleeve.

Josie crossed her arms. “We’re tiptoeing around the issue here,” she said. “You’re taking her in because she’s Muslim, not because she’s any kind of real suspect.”

“Alright,” said the police officer. “Both of you are coming to the station.”

“It’s true,” Sarah said softly. The policeman froze momentarily, but pretended not to hear.

“It’ll be alright,” Josie patted her friend’s shoulder. “They have no evidence.”

“They don’t need any.”

*******

Curtain! (Sorry, couldn’t resist) And with that depressing ending, I will take my leave.

(Also, I want to note that I imagine the story continuing with them letting Sarah go, because obviously they have no evidence, and then Sarah and Josie have to figure out who murdered Steve but that would only be if I continued the story, of course.)

Thanks for reading everyone!

Short Story: Emergency Services

Hello everyone!

This is a short story I whipped up very quickly in response to a prompt to write a 1k story with a theme. I’m not really sure what the theme of this is, and I went a little over 1k, but I thought it was kind of interesting. Enjoy!

Asma and Saafiya woke at the same time, the room between their two beds charged with nervous energy.

“Asma!” Saafiya hissed, clutching the edge of her bedframe and leaning over the side.

Asma groaned, her foot falling off the side of the bed and hitting the ground with a thump. “What’s wrong?” her words were slurred with sleep. She assumed that Saafiya had merely woken up because of some nightmare or other, and her being awake had summoned Asma from sleep as well.

Saafiya’s feet slid to the ground and she stood, looming over her older sister like a scarecrow. “I woke up,” she said.

Asma growled and threw a hand over her eyes. “Suck it up and go back to sleep. Good lord, this is why I don’t-” She startled as the door slammed open, a rectangle of light cast over the wood floor of the room. The two sisters whipped around to squint into the light, their eldest sister silhouetted in the doorway.

“Mom and Baba are gone,” she blurted, her hands braced on either side of the doorframe.

Saafiya went pale. “What do you mean?” her voice was sharp with disbelieving fear.

Zartaj flicked the light switch and sat down on Saafiya’s bed, her black hair spilling over her shoulders. “I mean they’re gone,” she said. “I can’t find them. I don’t know where they are. It’s too late-“

“That’s ridiculous,” Asma snapped. She fumbled for her phone, half of her body still covered in her duvet. The blue light of the screen washed over her face.

1:57 AM, the screen read. Too late for their parents to still be awake, but too early for them to be at the mosque for Fajr.

Asma sat up all the way and shoved her covers off, exposing her cut-off sweatpants and T-shirt. “You looked for them?” she tossed her phone aside. “Why?”

Zarjat put one arm around Saafiya, but Saafiya pushed it away. “I woke up and I felt- Almost sick, I guess. I had a nightmare- about Mom and Baba…” she trailed off, the fear she’d lived in her sleep still vivid in her mind. She shook her head to clear it. “Anyway, I decided to just- knock on the door and open it a crack. To see if they were awake still. So I could talk to them. But they weren’t even there.”

Asma stood. “You better not be messin with us.” She went out into the hallway and turned the lights on full blast. The idea of searching the house in the dark was not appealing to her. She glanced behind her to see if her sisters were following.

They were.

They searched the house top to bottom, the bathrooms, the basement, the patio, even the garage. Anyplace their parents could be, they searched.

That was when they realized the car was gone.

Saafiya’s face screwed up, tears leaking from behind her eyelids. “They took the car!” she wailed. “Why would they take the car? Maybe they’re dying and had to go to the hospital! What if they’re dying right now?”

Asma bit her lip. “Zarjat,” she said quietly. “What do you think?”

Zarjat folded her arms. “There’s a simple and logical explanation for this,” she said. “Let’s call them. Maybe there was an emergency with Gramma or something like that and they didn’t want to wake us up.”

All three girls knew this explanation was unlikely, but Asma and Zarjat pulled their phones out anyway.

They called simultaneously, Zarjat calling their Baba and Asma their mother.  The phones rang together at the same time, the beeps loud like echoes of themselves.

Ring.

Ring.

Ring.

A message began to play. Mom and Baba, speaking simultaneously from their respective inboxes, voices cracked and strained.

The sisters looked at each other, matching brown eyes wide.

“Zarjat. Asma. Saafiya. I’m so, so sorry. I won’t be able to make it up to you- neither of us will. We can’t expect you to help us- or anyone else. It’s all over. We’ve been taken. A lot of us. This message is all we get. We love you, so so much. Assalamualaikam.”

A robotic voice began to list the various numbers that could be pressed to save or discard the message. Both sisters quickly hit save.

“What do we do?” whispered Saafiya. The house suddenly felt very big and empty, their parents’ greetings of peace echoing across the house.

“Call the police. Now.” Asma looked at Zarjat, telling her to make the call with a silent glance.

Zarjat dialed 911.

It rang.

And rang.

And rang.

Eventually, an automated voice said, “Emergency services cannot be reached at this moment. We are sorry for the inconvenience. Have a nice day.”

“’Emergency services cannot be reached’?” Asma screamed. “’Have a nice day?’ What kind of absolute crap is this? How can I have a bloody nice day if I’m dying? If my parents are dying? Emergency services can’t go and take a Goddamned break!”

“Asma,” Zarjat’s hands were shaking. The phone dropped from her hand, the same message playing over and over again. “The police aren’t answering. What do we do if the police don’t answer?”

Saafiya picked the phone up and dialed 911 again. This time, there was no response at all.

Asma looked down resolutely. “We take matters into our own hands.”

Zarjat shook her head. “How?”

Saafiya handed Zarjat’s phone back to her. “We have the truck,” she said.

The older girls looked at her. “The truck?” they said in unison.

Saafiya was already pulling her hijab from the basket in the living room. “Yes. The truck. You can drive, Zari. We can go to the police station ourselves.”

Zarjat instinctively caught the scarf that Saafiya tossed to her. “But I’ve only just got my license,” she protested. “And the truck’s a stick.”

Asma wrapped her hijab haphazardly around her head. “Something is wrong,” she said. “and we have to figure out what it is. Going to the police is what you do when there’s an emergency. ”

Saafiya pulled an overskirt from the closet and passed it to Asma. “It’s Shaytaan,” she said.

Asma and Zarjat exchanged a look.

Zarjat bent slightly so that she was face-to-face with Saafiya. “What do you mean it’s Shaytaan? Because something bad happened?”

Saafiya paled but held her ground. “Yes. Bad is from Shaytaan. We have to stop him. This is a test. We have to get Mom and Baba back.”

Asma nodded. “I agree. We need to get going. We need to drive to the police station.”

Zarjat nodded and stood up straighter. “Alright,” she sighed. “I’ll get the keys.”

Asma held out a hand to Saafiya. “Let’s make some sandwiches,” she said. “I have a feeling we might be needing them.”

The girls got their supplies together and piled into the truck. The night air was cold around them, their breath crystallizing in front of them. The ride was jerky and rough, Zarjat muttering under her breath and slamming the gear shifter back and forth every time the truck stalled out. Asma sat in the passenger seat, with Saafiya squished between them. She held Zarjat’s phone in her hand and called every number she could think of, with no luck.

When they arrived at the police station, there was no one there. It was dark, the doors locked. They drove to the hospital next. The same problem greeted them.

“What now?” Asma whispered as they sat in the dark, the truck purring beneath them like it was the only other living thing in the world besides them.

“We go on,” Zarjat gritted her teeth and revved the engine. The truck shot down the road, carrying three lives and many fates within it.

***********

So, not my best work, unfortunately. However, I thought it was good enough to share here just for fun. I had a good time writing something so short and getting some of the dramatic elements right, so it was overall a good project for me.

Thanks for reading!

My NaNoWriMo 2018 Experience

Hie everyone!

Today I though I would talk a little about my NaNoWriMo experience. (If you don’t know what NaNoWriMo is here’s a link to the site: https://nanowrimo.org/dashboard) Basically, during the month of November participants write 50k words of a novel, hence national novel writing month. I’d known about it for a little while and had done the Camp NaNo months in April and July to warm up, but 2018 was my first time participating in November.

I wrote a YA contemporary fantasy that I had started to draft by hand many times, starting when I was eleven, so it was a project I’d had in mind for a long time. This was also my first time typing my book instead of writing by hand and my first time using Scrivener. So, a lot of firsts. I’m happy to say it went well!

The first week was kind of rocky. I only wrote 800 words on the first day instead of the recommended average of 1,677. I was still adjusting to college and having been a homeschooler my entire life college was an entirely new experience for me. I’d never been in a classroom setting before so it definitely took some getting used to. Luckily I was only taking two classes so I had enough time to write between homework.

I managed to catch up by the third or fourth day, and then there was a family emergency on the fifth. That made it difficult to write for a little while as everyone in my household was pretty emotional, but then writing helped me to calm down and settle back into a routine and the rest of the month went smoothly. I hit 50k about three or four days before November 30th, and I was so ecstatic! I had finally committed myself to writing a book and I had established a habit that allowed me to continue my writing. I managed another 40k in December and then another 27k in January, finishing with 117k altogether.

One thing that really helped me was wordsprints. I joined my region’s NaNoWriMo forum and participated in a lot of wordsprints which allowed me to get a good idea of my writing speed and also improved my writing speed a lot. I’m not sure how fast I could type before November (It was very slow. I still don’t type properly as my right hand does almost all the work but I can type much faster now.) but I know that now that my best was 500 in 20 minutes and I can easily do 1k an hour. That helps a lot because I like to calculate things and hit my best word count possible in the time I have left.

When I started my book I knew 50k wasn’t going to be long enough. I was writing a fantasy, which I know is always longer because of the worldbuilding. I also have four MCs (main characters) and a I also just like really big books. Originally, I didn’t have a good idea of exactly how many pages word count translated to, so I decided to go for 150k. After I had written 50k though and figured out around how much that was, I decided that anywhere after 100k would be good, so I’m happy with my 117k.

Maybe I’ll do a post soon about my book itself! In the meantime, thanks for reading!

100-Word Story for GoTeenWriters Contest

Hi everyone!

So a little while ago I entered a small contest on GoTeenWriters (https://goteenwriters.com/blog/) and while I didn’t make the top fifteen, I received some nice feedback and I thought I’d share what I wrote here!

The prompt for the story was “As soon as we arrived, I knew I had been right to think that this was a bad idea.” The contest rules were to write 100 words or less with the prompt as the first sentence. Here’s what I wrote:

As soon as we arrived, I knew I had been right to think that this was a bad idea.
There were three of us lined up against the wall. The only thing that separated us from the jumpsuited men was a low wooden table.
The men were killers, all of them. I could see their crimes listed above their heads in slow motion scenes, murders playing out over and over, guns shooting off and knives being pulled from still-warm bodies in a splurt of blood.
I leaned over the table, my fingers digging into the wood so hard that my knuckles bent backwards with a slight popping sound.
I couldn’t feel the pain.
I never felt the pain.

It’s slightly dark, I know. I thought it was interesting though, and after working on a novel it was refreshing to do something so short and be done. I feel like it definitely has the potential to go further if I wanted to take it up again. Maybe as a dystopian-supernatural-police consultant story?

One of the things that I received in my feedback was that the story was slightly confusing, especially the part where it says “I could see their crimes listed above their heads in slow motion scenes…” and I realized that that line was definitely something I should have clarified a little more. Sometimes as a writer I find it difficult to explain things in a way that can be understood by someone who doesn’t already have the picture in their heads. I understand what I’m writing because I already have the end result in my head. But for a reader, the writing is their introduction to that world, not the product of it.

Anyway, I hope you enjoyed my little snippet and thanks for reading!

About Moody Narwhal Writes

Hello everyone! This is my first post and I’m so excited!

I decided to start this blog because I want to take writing a bit more seriously. I have a first draft of a novel that I want to edit and hopefully submit to the 2019 Pitch Wars. I write YA contemporary fantasy and adventure, and am a fan of a wide range of genres.

I participated in the 2018 NaNoWriMo for the first time and won! After that I continued writing my draft, finishing mid-January with a 117k novel. Editing has been really slow, mainly because it’s a new process for me and I’m not sure what I’m doing, or whether I’m doing it right. I hope that this blog will motivate me to finish what I started!

I plan to post snippets of my writing and any short stories I’ve written, as well as my experiences during NaNoWriMo and Camp NaNoWriMo. I’d also like to write about some of my favorite books, including YA and MG. Hopefully I’ll be able to write about querying sometime in the future! I would love to be a published author, it’s one of my biggest dreams.

About myself: I’m currently a freshman at my local community college, I love to read, write, and crochet amigurumi. I am a practicing Muslimah and one of the things I feel is important in my writing is to represent both Muslims and POC in YA fiction. Narwhals are some of my favorite animals, along with sloths and anything remotely cute.

I’ll have some writing to post soon! Thanks for reading!